Sarah Chapman Shines!

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Sarah Chapman, aerialist turned author announces  Lycka Till ~ More Secrets of an Ex-Circus Aerialist, available as a $2.99 Amazon eBook. It’s the creative non-fiction sequel to Balancing Act, her survival memoir. Lycka Till  is the author’s exploits after 1984, when her memoir ends. Chapman is also the author of Simply Sarah, A Circus Girl’s Cookbook, a light-hearted story of a family and their travels with anecdotes and photos.

Over the July 4th holiday Sarah volunteered to cook in a tent on the National Mall as part of the Smithsonian’s 2017 National Folklife Festival Circus Arts program. “Cooking twice daily in one-hour segments in front of a live crowd was exhilarating,” she says. “My participation gave the audience insights of an American circus performer’s lifestyle.”

Also in July, Sarah attended Baraboo, Wisconsin’s Ringling Bros. Circus Reunion as a 1969-1974 featured aerialist. 500 folks came from across the nation to revel in their unique history, become Grand Marshalls in the Big Top Parade, and relish in live performances at Circus World Museum and the fabulous Al Ringling Theater.

When not traveling, Sarah lives and writes in northern Minnesota.

Florida Writers Association October Conference

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This year’s Conference is going to be the best ever.

“What A Character”

October 19 – 22 in Altamonte Springs, Florida

Whether you’re just getting started, or midway through a 400-page opus, or have published multiple books, the Florida Writers Conference is the one writers conference for you.

Larry J. Leech II’s novel is here!

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Black Oyster Publishing is proud to announce the release of Unholy Quest. Larry J. Leech, II, author of over twenty books, has produced his first book of fiction, and its a worthwhile addition to his body of work. Find it on Amazon.com. You’ll be glad you shared this excellent story. Larry has been a well-known name in the inspirational market for many years. He has taught his craft at writing conferences around the country. See how he puts his skill and knowledge to work in the first installment of his trilogy; Unholy Quest.

 

Kubec to release another Novel

Award Winning Author

Bruce Kubec, and award-winning novelist has submitted his latest work to the RPLA writing contest.  He has received notice  he is a semi-finalist and is hopefully awaiting announcement of the final awards at the FWA October annual conference.  We will await his new book. Bruce’s other books are available on Amazon.com.

Fiction Writers’ Tips

Larry Leech

1. Generic verbs and nouns Imagine trying to paint everything in the world using only four colors. The results would probably look pretty generic. When you are a writer, your language is your medium. People, places, and things (i.e., nouns) have names, and it’s your job to know what they are. Precise nouns work wonders in fiction writing because nouns have connotations or meanings that go beyond their dictionary definitions. If one character gives another character flowers, tell us what kind of flowers. Are they tulips or columbines or snapdragons or peonies? This information could hint at what time of year it is (tulips are pretty scarce in September) and could also tell us something about the character who gives the flowers. Four dozen roses are expensive—does this person have money or like to show off? A bouquet of wildflowers might have come from the character’s backyard— perhaps this person likes to garden. A similar thought process should be applied to the selection of verbs. There are at least 12 synonyms for the verb to laugh, and each one evokes a specific image. A character could express amusement by cackling, chortling, chuckling, giggling, guffawing, snickering, sniggering, tittering, crowing, whooping, simpering, or smirking. Precise verbs contribute greatly to characterization. If a man walks into a room, all we know is that he has entered. He could be anybody. But if he limps in, right away we want to know if he is old or injured or tired. If he gallops in, we know he is energetic or excited about some piece of news. If he swaggers, we wonder if he is full of himself or perhaps just drunk.

2. The exception: He said, she said Reading good dialogue makes us feel like we’re actually listening in on a real conversation. Because of this, it can be very disruptive if the author keeps butting in to tell us that the speaker intoned or declared or asserted or retorted. It could seem that using said repeatedly in dialogue tags is repetitive, but in fact the little word is so inconspicuous it just fades into the background—which is exactly what we want when we’re trying to listen in on a good conversation. The rare deviation is fine (asked, in particular, seems to be okay once in a while), but if you find yourself using a colorful synonym for every dialogue tag in your manuscript, you may be doing more harm than good.

3. Adjective/Adverb ­or rhea Sometimes a well-placed and specific adverb or adjective strengthens or clarifies an image. However, many writers, in a misguided attempt to make their fiction writing descriptive, overuse these words. If you master the use of precise nouns and verbs (see tip number one), you’ll almost certainly avoid the bad habit of propping up a weak verb or noun with a host of intrusive modifiers, as in the following example:

Carrying a steaming and fragrant mug, she walked angrily and loudly into his office. Why write that, when you could have simply said: Carrying her peppermint tea, she stormed into his office. The second sentence actually gives us more information using fewer words.

Furthermore, when editing your manuscript, be especially wary of adjectives that don’t actually convey much… interesting, lovely, exciting, beautiful …and adverbs that introduce redundancy… stereo blared loudly (blared implies high volume) scrubbed vigorously (scrubbed implies intensity) …or contradict the meaning of the verb or adjective they modify. slightly pregnant (with pregnancy, you either are or aren’t!) very unique (something is either unique or not unique)

4. Inconsistent point of view An author of fiction must choose the perspective, or point of view, from which a story will be told. In first-person narration, one character tells the story in his or her own voice (using I).

Third-person narration can be either limited (an objective narrator tells the story by focusing on a particular character’s thoughts and interactions) or omniscient (the narrator sees and hears all).

No single point of view is better than another, but once you have made a choice, be consistent. If your story is told in first-person, remember that the narrator must be present in every scene he describes to the reader; otherwise, how would he have the information?

If a limited third-person narrator who hears only Tom’s thoughts tells the story for the first four chapters, the reader should not suddenly be privy to the mailman’s daydreams in chapter five. Of course, there are some fine examples of novels that experiment with point of view by switching between narrators. But even in these stories, some kind of predictable pattern is imposed for clarity, such as a change in narrator from one chapter to the next but not within a chapter.

5 . Unnaturally expositional, stilted, or irrelevant dialogue Read your dialogue out loud. Does it sound like the way people actually talk (without all the ums and ahs and boring digressions, of course)? Do the characters rattle off factual information you are trying to shoehorn into the story? Are they talking about the weather? Because if they’re talking about the weather, you’d better have a good reason for it. Otherwise, the reader will feel bored, and a bored reader closes his or her book and turns on the TV.